Some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There is a certain group of people who prefer summers. However, mainly tends to live in the areas of the orld that are mostly low in temperature. Humans who are used to warm climates and like sunny days prefer summer whereas, others like winters. I would support both kind of people as in my opinion, humans adopt weather, of which, they are mostly used to.
There can be of multiple reasons for inhabitants choosing to live in warm climates than the cold ones. However, looking at some major causes, the first and foremost that tickle into my mind is, the place of birth of a person and where he/she has spent their most of life. For example, If a person is born in an area where there is mostly hot weather and sunny days, then this person is less likely to bear the extreme cold weather. Therefore, same is the case with people that are fond of cold weather likely to live in areas where there is mostly winter because they can bear the cold but not the hot weather.
In my opinion, both people are free of choosing their lifestyle and can choose whatever they are more comfortable with. For example, if there is a person who is born in northern areas and spends most of his life there then it would be hard for him/her to settle in an area with mostly hot. Furthermore, same is for people who are likely to live in areas where there is low temperature. These people can also not bare the warm climate.
In conclusion to this, a few amounts of people tend to live in warm climates whereas, remaining like to spend there lives where the temperature is quite low and mostly have winters. I consider that both kinds have there owned likes and priorities, the ones that are found of summers and like sunny days are the ones that spend most of there life in warm areas. However, the humans that are used to cold weathers, are the ones who like snow or cold weather and is used to such climate. In my opinion, it is the choice of a person whether they want to live in areas with warm climates or the areas that are mostly cold.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38095238095 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12810915521 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404761904762 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.102506977 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219544998138 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876417171667 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509446926766 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153928193796 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145183626629 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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