For any individual, having their own home is essential. Some people believe that it is better to stay in a house, while others feel that apartment is a better option. In my opinion, staying in a house has more perks than living in a house. My explanation is justified further.
Discussing the advantages, living in a house is a great property investment. One can posses the portion of land in which their house is built. In opposite to this, in any residential apartment, no matter how much someone pay, but the land is always going to be divided amongst other owners. Moreover, people can enjoy great bond with surrounding neighborhood. Nowadays, having some connections with people living next to your house is considered as a big asset as relatives stay far away from each other. This is true if someone is senior citizen or have long term health issues. A good neighbor is always trustworthy.
Besides these, if someone is having long extended family, they can build 2-3 floors in single land and enjoy living together. For example, in India still there are lots of family who are staying together since their grandparents’ time. In addition to this, people can make alterations in their house as and when required. In apartment system, it is not allowed to change outer look of the property and even certain aspects of your home. That is why it is more beneficial to stay in a house.
However, there are certain merits of living in apartment too. People should not worry about any maintenance or utilities issues. They all are covered by the managing staff. If someone loves to stay alone, then it is a perfect choice.
To conclude, there are positives such as great investment and surrounding neighborhood of living in a house and that is why advantages of staying in a house surpasses the perks of living in a apartment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
... someone is senior citizen or have long term health issues. A good neighbor is alway...
^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... house surpasses the perks of living in a apartment.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79179810726 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69464896774 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2061902313 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0952380952 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334205930069 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870891879421 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997307703623 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196844663135 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688829558054 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
... someone is senior citizen or have long term health issues. A good neighbor is alway...
^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... house surpasses the perks of living in a apartment.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79179810726 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69464896774 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2061902313 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0952380952 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334205930069 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870891879421 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997307703623 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196844663135 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688829558054 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.