Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and giver your opinion.
Online shopping platform is the recent introduction in the market. Many individuals prefer to purchase using this platform, however, others still like to go to the shopping market for food purchase. This essay will discuss why online shopping is beneficial but the traditional way of shopping is more advantageous.
On the one hand, visiting shopping market is itself an advantage for the customer while purchasing as it allows him to explore the food items before purchasing, which is essential for any customer to choose a right quality product. For illustration, the selection of good quality mangoes depends on the smell, colour and physical texture of the product, therefore it becomes vital to examine the product before purchase and this can only be achieved by visiting food malls.
On the other hand, online shopping of food provides a platform to select a wide range of variety of products during purchase. The availability of a range of products makes this platform most useful in obtaining food products. For instance, more than 10 varieties of mango fruits are available on Amazon online shopping as it involves international as well as local brands. In addition to that, the purchasing can be done at any time according to customer convenience. In this modern world time saving is an important aspect for any working individual, thus a majority of the youngsters prefer online shopping of food items rather than going themselves to the market.
In conclusion, while, online purchasing is considered more convenient and with ample of options, I believe that the real sense of purchasing food items demands physical verification before buying food grocery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an going themselves to the market. In conclusion, while, online purchasing is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25278810409 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83233320044 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.924772745 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232767945091 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102614455122 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584477122402 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151662261516 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636326494646 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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