Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and giver your opinion.
Online shopping platform is the recent introduction in the market. Many individuals prefer to purchase using this platform, however, others still like to go to the shopping market for food purchase. This essay will discuss why online shopping is trending but the traditional way of shopping is more advantageous.
On the one hand, visiting food malls allow person to select the food items which they want after verification physically, such as, looking for physical damage and smell of the product to know about the product quality. For instance, ripe mango are yellow in color and smells fruity aromatic, the slight finger press shows the tenderness in the product, all of these make customer ensure that the product is right for purchase. Hence, people prefer to purchase food items in shops and malls by going there and benefits themselves by selecting better product according to their needs.
On the other hand, online shopping of food allow person to select wide range of products including the prize as well at any time. Shopping from home during any hour with the help of internet or phone dialing, allows person to choose products according to their budgets, therefore this way of purchasing is considered more economical and friendly. For instance, purchase of mango in online shopping application Amazon provides the prize range from 1 dollar to 95 dollar range and the variety of mango from Alphonso to Badami , more importantly people can order these products at any time.
In conclusion, while, online purchasing is considered more convenient and with ample of options, the real sense of purchasing food items demands physical verification before buying food grocery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: yellow
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...variety of mango from Alphonso to Badami , more importantly people can order these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22058823529 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58258643877 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5358758217 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258941767376 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119026867295 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693075590807 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158646126419 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602767304423 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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