Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, a torrent of varied perspectives from changes have been delivered by numerous people. Any individuals try to interpret these concepts in connection of their experiences they have had during their lives. Clearly, there are some people who eagerly believe in alternations and immerse themselves into them while some still stick to the consistent life with both hands. I am more positive with the first group that put entire practice in order to attain flourishing by the assistance of changes.
Overtly, the world is pervaded by tremendous people who prefer to remain in their comfort zone in order to establish amenity and convenience. They would call this span as a secure path of life in which it is so straight. In other words, they really tend to persuade this monotonous way with no dents or bumps. It could not be found any trace of adventurous. Furthermore, they proceed to be more resilient than to be more limber or even risky against swings. As an illustration, a person who always deny to migrate just due to new pressure circumstance which might be occurred.
On the reverse side of the coin, there is a large number of people who highly consider fluctuations as the best constructive factors to manufacture their lives into prosperity. In other words, these people are uninterruptedly attempting to switch conditions upon acquiring final lucrative position. In addition, they are adequate knowledgeable to display their flexibility and adaptability during these routes. Absolutely, there is no complacency for them. To provide with an example, for being survived in the world of business, a businessman knows well how to alter the approach of transactions according to needs of current society.
By way of conclusion, it is evident from all discussion that both arguments carry their own advocates who deem changes are significant elements highlight successes in their lives and the next camp who extremely stabilize their life-template.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, really, so, still, well, while, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23101265823 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00907103476 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8962150248 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146601466333 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399485860771 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043570406301 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093514234333 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386462231517 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.