Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary world, there is a noticeable increase in the number of products, their varieties, and their varied bands which are bringing an innumerable inquietude not only for consumers to choose their favorable goods but also competition between producers to convince buyers to purchase. As a result, advertisement is playing the most conspicuous role to sway people into buying. However, these limitless products may not the real needs of the society. In my own perception, I am more positive with the statement given in the question.
These days, entire companies have to expand their products into variety if they astonishingly demand to survive. They altitude their product lines without regarding into valuable efficiency. Thus, the various beneficial or detrimental goods are being uninterruptedly manufactured, these products would not even meet the real needs of society. Furthermore, this flourishing launching might be accomplished by the power of advertising. Undoubtedly, advertisement is a primary element in economic to mirror the volume of high sales. Predominantly, consumers are more likely to purchase products from brands with which they are familiar. By the mean, advertisement expose products in specious ways, they might ask some famous people to ballyhoo any goods due to attaining high sales. For example, a cosmetic production that is selling their products in high price just because under its own well-known reputation.
On the other hand, there are various aspects against this argument. Moreover, some people still hold to this conservative view that advertising is not remarkable means to persuade consumer making decision, who are not simply swayed by the deceptive and misleading way of advertising and those skyrocketing sales of products. Truly, these mentioned people are somehow meticulous with their real needs and high quality of goods. Consequently, it is difficult to distract their purchasing by tempting advertisements and slogans. For instance, a commercial may imply that if a bold person buys a new advertised shampoo, he or she will face with a torrent of hair. However, in reality paying money for this product will not bring the expected result.
To sum up, there are some people who are highlighting the power of advertisements to burgeon high ranking sales of products whether they are necessitous demands or not. In addition, there are some people who are ignoring the products which are intensely exposed by advertisements. I personally, subscribe to the position that advertisement could carry the most impressive burden to lunch a new product into popular product, although this product might not the chief good that customers expect to possess.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47980997625 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04948902696 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565320665083 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2411631065 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0476190476 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61904761905 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17937278057 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561733786595 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391356293056 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11653891287 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022866265342 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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