Some people say that art (eg. painting, music, poetry…) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Practice makes perfect. Despite the emphasis placed on whether art is only for those who are gifted but not for the ordinary people, I believe it depends on the individual's willingness to learn and achieve than the natural talents. Let us discuss this matter further for a deeper understanding.
Firstly, it is admitted that those who are gifted can quickly produce masterpieces with lesser effort compared to those who are not. Secondly, most of the times, these prodigies show their talents at their early ages and inevitably mastering their desired path. For instance, Beethoven, Michelangelo are some of such accomplished people who have changed the world with their natural abilities.
A well-trained prodigy can make history in an unprecedented way compared to ordinary people.
Conversely, among those common people, some are willing to achieve their dreams by learning and practising. Moreover, such individuals are highly determined on their goals, and they push their limits to get what they want. For example, many self-taught talented painters and musicians have made the world their playground. They are working side-by-side with gifted people to make a difference in their fields.
Furthermore, if a gifted person did not practice and put the required effort, it would be impossible to achieve the quality of their work. Therefore, there is a significant impact on individual willingness to master anything despite special abilities.
In the final analysis, while people with special abilities can achieve the pinnacle easier, those who are determined achieve the same by keep practising and learning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Michelangelo) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
.... For instance, Beethoven, Michelangelo are some of such accomplished people who ha...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an unprecedented way" with adverb for "unprecedented"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...A well-trained prodigy can make history in an unprecedented way compared to ordinary people. Convers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48015873016 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85503394391 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4843908911 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15522774819 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507957623949 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405293673381 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802889357848 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340193496614 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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