Some people say that to benefit the development of a child, the mother and father should take presenting classes. to what extent you agree or disagree with this statement?
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, it is argued that parenting classes must be taken by guardians which is lucrative for the evolvement of a child. Here, i would like to accord with the given statement.
There are manifold benefits of this practice. First and foremost, such classes teach culture, tradition and ethics that keep them in a good manner in all walks of life. To illustrate, they can make read successful stories about great leaders such as Einstein, Alexandra and Newton which will impart them a great deal of knowledge as how they can keep their mindset when they get failures. In addition to this, Children's mind like as canvas what we print, they consider as the exact same. For instance, they should tell them the stories of their ancestors that will teach them many life lessons are never loose yourself, have spirit of emulation, become crowd puller. Thence, child is expected to become strong mentally and intellectual.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Entertainment plays a paramount to develop child's mind. To elaborate, father and mother should make them some education programmes on television as quiz, sports, national athletics related and so forth, child not only become knowledgeable but also enjoy such programs. Thus, as it is said that Knowledge is invaluable power".
They think that this trend might harm the child's development. To initiate with, these classes can be hectic that makes them mentally fatigue. In this context, children have to study at school and go for tuition, they do not have much time to spend with their parents. Apart from it, this phenomena makes them pressurized and then they are unable to concentrate on their path. As a result, such classes have no meaning for a child to attend.
To recapitulate, some handful masses assert that this practice is bane for them. However, i still believe that it is boon for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, then, thus, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03726708075 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60669843689 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621118012422 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3702921512 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172404963544 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547413618632 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042297652612 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942979902322 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292394352148 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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