Recently, the phenomenon of maintaining good health and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although, contested by many that the matter of playing sports is highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a many substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that physical exercise can be a plus, I will analyse throughout this essay.
From the social stand point, improving public health can provide the society with some noticeable effects which is rooted in the fact that stress relaxation as well as body fitness are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when i was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discover physical characterstics. It was a beneficial ramifications of both mental problems and stressful situations apparently can be seen.
within the realm of educational science, dangerous sports might increase the consequences of intellectual abilities, moreover, fundamental aspects of practical skills relate to this reality that the demerits of determental problems pertain to life threatening sports. some scientific research has undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of risk taking sports correlated negatively with dangerous sports. Hence, it is correct to presume preconceived notion of mental features.
To conclude, while there is some compelling arguements on both sides. i profoundly believe that the benefits of improving public health far outweigh its drawbacks. not only do the advantages of physical exercise prove the significance of offering encouragement, but also pinpoint body balance implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81048387097 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26205191564 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665322580645 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7149966069 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163460141175 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506281440463 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470481402086 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885082910809 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212999343872 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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