Despite improvements in sanitation and medication, the level of health and wellbeing of people has decreased compare to the past. As a solution to this problem increasing sport facilities has been suggested. However, some believe this approach does not contribute to a desired and favorable result.
It is an anecdotal fact that easy access to an acceptable sport center can encourage people to get away from TV and engage in some physical activity specially when it comes free of charge. As an example installing sport means in parks or dedicate special areas as sport room in public venues can encourage parents and children to exercise together. The major advantage of this approach is that it points out all walks of life regardless of their age, wealth and capability.
Nevertheless, experts claim that these facilities will benefit already fit and healthy people, as, most of the modern life diseases such as obesity is mainly due to the person’s laziness and immobility. As a result, installing sport facilities in parks and public venues will not lead to a healthier society. Alternatively acknowledging people about importance of wellbeing and consequences of excessive use of alcohol, tobacco and fast foods should be every government’s priority. In addition, hefty tax on unhealthy products and increasing their price can act as a deterrent and make people think twice befor purchase them.
In conclusion, I gather increasing sport facilities is narrow an approach and to root out the problem authorities and people in charge should focus on people’s life style and aware them about healthier diet practice and more active leisure activities. Undoubtedly, educating children in school to construct a healthy culture is only silver bullet to this problem.
- Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? 67
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both views and give your own op 87
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ople has decreased compare to the past. As a solution to this problem increasing s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85053115309 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2358327182 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts,knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148919329552 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056101588814 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338870200919 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095590469681 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046953438864 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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