Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays when you travel around the world many products in shops and stores are pretty much the same; this uniformity has increased the resemblance factors of countries. this phenomenon wreaks the havoc with tourist situation and job opportunity in countries.
First of all, it’s agreed upon that one of the most important and attractive aspect and facet of a country for a tourist is local and native products. Local and native products produced by local ingredients reveals many attributes of a nation’s culture and ethos. take Japanese traditional tea ceremony as an example; this party is inconceivable without those little ceramic tea pots. or Iranian “Dizi” without those stone pots. so local product reserve traditional values of a particular nation and plus, attract more foreign visitor.
Secondly, exotic and foreign products seize the job opportunity of local people and spread the unemployment. Even though sometimes imported products are cheaper and more quality; still it’s our obligation to support and purchase local and native products. that’s how we can construct a healthy economy.
In conclusion, however some say it is everyone’s right to access to all product but I strongly believe that foreign and imported products do more harm than good and native products are the best for its own region and culture. it is every government’s duty to acknowledge their people and society about economic and social consequences of purchasing non-native products.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266903914591 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.0960854092527 0.155533422707 62% => OK
Adjectives: 0.149466192171 0.0946595960268 158% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0427046263345 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0355871886121 0.0437548338989 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0889679715302 0.122226691241 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0142348754448 0.0403226058552 35% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.04279511479 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0142348754448 0.0326793684256 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0818505338078 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00355871886121 0.021408717616 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00711743772242 0.011925033212 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1519.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 232.0 316.048096192 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5474137931 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.443965517241 0.374742101984 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.344827586207 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.245689655172 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159482758621 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04279511479 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64224137931 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 69.6877756513 60.7387585426 115% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3333333333 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1810099751 49.517814964 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.583333333 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 53.816091954 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.12244897959 1.69124875643 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32159504097 0.332605444948 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123263025986 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0851088397131 0.0668466124924 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.580768893041 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192776486474 0.148594505496 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128833858262 0.134430193775 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929587604377 0.0742795772207 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.3380886333 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121757776862 0.0638462369009 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23379199306 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747763124367 0.058150111329 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.