Since the establishment of human civilization, The human being are continuously searching ways to reduce the poverty and live a healthy-wealthy life. But, some people says that economic development is essential to reduce the poverty whereas some say that it damages our natural environment.
Poverty is one of the most common drawback of our society and it still have presence all over the world. However, government of all the countries are finding various ways to reduce the number of their citizens that still lives in poverty, by providing them proper homes to live, food , hospitals etc., and also by providing them jobs as workforce in manufacturing factories. So, they build more and more factories by virtue of which poor people improves their living standards. It could be an iron ore factory, an cloth manufacturing factory or food processing factories. These all activities of government provide economic development in society and reduce the poverty.For example we see many manufacturing factories in China which boost and at the same time robust their economy and help in reduce poverty.
On the other hand, these same activities of building concrete jungles destroys the natural environment like fertility of the soil and quality of the drinking water and reduce vegetation. The solid waste is not decomposed in soil and it severely affects the fertility of upper layer of soil which reduce its ability to grow crops. One more example is factory's pollution which provide air pollution, water pollution and solid pollution. Because of all the pollution many species extincts from our ecosystem.
In the conclusion, better way to do the economic development is by sustainable development.
Sustainable developments is a development in which bad effects of any economic development on surrounding environment are eliminate. for examples planting trees around factories, water harvesting , protection of soil fertility etc.
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food?What could be done to encourage people to buy local food? 56
- Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, whereas, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41721854305 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02567928089 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5678019382 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191239380386 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069386766081 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100397034597 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125291095814 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100275489659 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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