Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that History is one of the most essential subjects in school, while there are others who think that Science and Technology are more important than History. In my opinion, I believe that both subjects which we should keep a balance on are very important, it would lead to a better development of students.
On the one hand, many think History plays a crucial role in schools' subjects. One evident benefit to it is that it would enable students to expand their knowledge and therefore understand the world better. In other words, if students learn History in school, it would be easier for them to know what happened before between different countries and regions. Another reason that studying History would be advantageous is that it would help construct a harmonious world. With students getting more history knowledge, they could learn from history and therefore the world would avoid wars happening, resulting in a healthier world.
On the other hand, having Science and Technology education, such as computer science and programming, could also be helpful to students' improvement. Since technology is the foundation of a country, and the development of it relies on younger generation, those who without advanced technology knowledge would not be competitive in seeking good jobs.
Finally, in my opinion, it is important for students to have both History education and Science education at the same time. While History could broaden students' horizons, learning science would enhance their logical thinking skills, which is equally important for their future career or personal development.
In conclusion, History and Science are both keys to students' development. School should make sure they set up history and science at the same time to promote the comprehensive development of students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32068965517 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79195591582 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8799427537 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317188616744 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127944248797 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102153454721 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189193187156 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981128207017 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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