Some people say that holding sport competitions can cause problems for the host country. Other disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sport competitions are held each year in many different countries. Some people believe that such competitions, will cause problems for the host country, others disagree and think it has positive reputation to their state.
On one hand, the majority of people agree, since it will cause some problems and impact negatively on the country. First, many problems will be caused from fans such as fights, erections or thefts. Second, there will be a big number of tourists, fans and this will lead to increase in polluting the streets with waste and turning them into a garbage dump. However, expenses will increase on the country, to secure the safety for their locals and their properties, addition to the fans and tourists. For example, in Russia 2018 during World Cup competition, a combat happened between English fans and local people, which turned the streets into a fighting ring and many got injured. From my side I agree, since sport competitions will cause many problems and increases country expenses.
On the other hand, some people disagree and think that his will be a great step to their country, it will affect their economy positively. First, increase in tourists, people from all over the world are excited to visit new places, meet new tradition and culture. Second, such competitions will help the country economically and open the opportunity for many investors to come and start new business. Moreover, people will meet new ones, there will be homogeneity in between people and cultures. For example, Vietnam in 2020 will welcome its first Formula 1 race, this will contribute to increase in economy and attract tourists to visit this Asian country yearly. In my opinion I disagree, where some points will cause problems especially these days, due to increase in terrorism and lack of security in some countries.
Finally, some people believe that sport competitions will cause problems, others disagree. As I think, sport competitions will lead to many issues especially between fans and cause losses to the country economically and threat their national security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...port competitions are held each year in many different countries. Some people believe that suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17994100295 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5856900141 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489675516224 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0954467223 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233124999437 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105650747242 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877746606962 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199687044052 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610327828878 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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