Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports competitions such as Olympics are considered to be one of the most happening and talked about event around the globe. Some people believe that country’s faces a lot of challenges when hosting any sports competition; other group asserts the importance and advantages of holding such events. I shall discuss both perspectives in detail in the following paragraphs, before reaching a final verdict.
To begin with, predominantly, the evident benefit of hosting sports competition is the economic advantage for any country. When hosting the event, spectators around the globe rush to visit that particular country where event is being organized. This resulting in more tourists, people buying tickets of the event goes in Government profits. In addition to this, besides attending the event only, people visit different places as well. Thus, all this activity results in more revenue, more money circulation and eventually country’s sound financial position.
On the other hand, despite of having numerous benefits, there are certain demerits of this phenomenon which cannot be overlooked. One obvious trouble is the added responsibility over the Government to organize the occurrence. The state officials comes under grave pressure to make certain arrangements for bigger scale events like Olympics. Innumerable pivotal aspects needs to be taken into consideration such as security of audience and special guests, security and hospitality arrangement of players from around the world and the so on. For instance, country’s who have organized Olympic event in the past did work really hard to execute smooth and successful event.
To summarize the aforementioned argument, I opine that hosting sports competition is one great opportunity for any country as it has innumerable advantages in terms of economic stability and visibility of the country to the whole world. Certain troubles do occur but they do not carry much weight and can be worked upon easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'officials'' or 'official's'?
Suggestion: officials'; official's
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Message: You should probably use 'come'.
Suggestion: come
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, really, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51973684211 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98900773565 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634868421053 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3960394098 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105433888715 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360596440269 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430655047228 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736259608343 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681176765586 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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