Space exploration is a luxury that we cannot afford. Instead of spending billions of dollars on space programs, governments should use this money to fight global problems such as poverty, disease and climate change. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write atleast 250 words.
Learning new things are always good – but learning on the cost of compromising major issues will be considered as stupidity. Aforementioned statement about focusing on poverty, medical assistance and making this world a beautiful place to live by working on the environment can draw anyone’s attention on the importance of these necessary aspects of life. I strongly agree with the point that instead of spending billions in exploration of space, we must focus on the bigger issues that a majority of population is facing.
Almost one third or more of this world’s population is spending their lives below the poverty line. There are people who starved for several days and don’t have enough food for them or their families. There are water crises all over the world which needs our attention more than exploring the outer space. In Africa, there are places where people are forced to drink muddy water which causes epidemic stomach problems.
Same is the case with medical assistance. The amount governments are investing in such programs, can be used to find cure of expensive diseases like cancer, HIV etc. as hundreds of thousand people died every year due to these diseases. In addition to this, there are countries where people cannot even bare the cost of cure for normal diseases which eventually become life taking in most of the cases. Helping people in getting such services will serve the humanity in a better way than to send a team of scientist in space for research.
On the contrary, with every passing day, our world is facing issue of global warming and pollution which is making this world unsafe for all of us. Government should spend on educating the people on how to make this world a better place to live by protecting if from pollution free.
To recapitulate, I must say that by overcoming all above stated problems, we can make this world a place of peace and harmony for each and every one of us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
... world a place of peace and harmony for each and every one of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, third, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87311178248 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58536850407 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577039274924 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5529817834 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163882109249 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534841199159 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557219343257 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085553246045 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347469624509 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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