Nowadays, the tension between the countries is at peak with one country having an issue with the other due to the difference of opinion or lending a helping hand to a country which is not supported by the other. As a result, the issues build up between the nations or a group of nations. There are some people who feel that the hosting of international events would help in achieving the world peace while the remaining few hold a dissenting opinion. The essay will deal with both the sides followed by a conclusion.
On the one hand, we are living in a world where the difference of opinion can lead to disputes or sanctions being imposed on countries and some people feel that the sports events will help in attaining world peace. It is rightly said so as in any international sports events the nations are involved in large scale with even the intervention of governments and their staff as well. This type of interaction would not have been feasible without the events. For instance, the FIFA World Cup 2018 had paved way for the NATO countries to have a friendly visit to Russia which had been facing harsh sanctions from the NATO head country and the same due to the pressure of the other NATO members, the American President was constrained to meet the Russian counterpart which has impliedly ended the cold war between the two nations and eased sanctions although the said move has been criticized by the members of Senate of the United States. Therefore, these events help in setting the stage which would have not been feasible otherwise and attain the goals which are not easy without the global stage.
On the other hand, some people hold a dissenting opinion and say that the events to set a global stage where the countries can come to the same level and sort out their differences, but nowadays, most of the countries are resorting to neglect the events which are hosted by the country with which the relations are sour or due to some diplomatic issue the countries do not have faith over each other. To cite an example, many countries are now following the footsteps of Canada, the United States and Thailand who ignored participation in Olympic Games, 1980 due to the Soviet invasion of Afghanistan. The countries find it a better alternative to ignore the stage and linger on to settle the dispute and come on the same page. Thus, it can be said that with the ignorance of the respective countries no concrete steps can be taken.
In conclusion, it can be undoubtedly said that the stage is set by the global events. However, if the countries are not willing to sort out the issues then nothing fruitful can be achieved from these events. The world peace cannot be achieved by ignoring the stage and not acknowledging the issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'few holds'.
Suggestion: few holds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 484.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69628099174 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52375758196 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452479338843 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.004960483 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.0625 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170259263843 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580814604581 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880438147252 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100879305638 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545877772512 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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