Nowadays, it is told to be many prescribed way for predicting people's characteristics based on their choice of food, color and so on. Some people opine that external appearance and dressing sense of a person can reflect his cultural values and personality traits. I completely disagree with this statement and i will cast light on my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark on, some of the sentiments and traditions can be inferred from the dressing one chooses to wear but it is only limited to externalities. For example consider the Sikhs who wear turban. It can definitely tell about the background and religion of a person. Likewise, many Muslim women wear scarfs to conceal their hairs and on the other hand, societies also witnessed many terrorist attacks being done by Islamic women wearing scarfs. Following the theory of judging people according to their attires may generate the concept that all such women are terrorists. So, appearance of the people is not an appropriate mirror of their character.
Furthermore, with the rampant globalisation it has become possible to find same merchandise at the same time in different geographical places. For youths, it is an important concern to follow the latest trends. For instance, blue jeans is a piece of cloth that is available in all societies and among wide ranges of people regardless to gender, age, education, culture and personality. Hence, it cannot represent anything about people's ideology and thoughts.
To recapitulate, clothes choice is not a reliable issue for categorizing people. So, it is recommended not to let such stereotype effect on our choices of people for starting conversation and getting acquaintance.
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- Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, may, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99417782258 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7097245297 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21139568859 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648090623461 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472070565526 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116812383323 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416744999767 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.