Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Everyone wants to be happy in life. There are many factors which help us to achieve happiness. Some believe that the principal source of happiness is to be financially well off. This essay will highlight on the causes to be happy in life. Whether it is money or any other factors which help people to be happy will be thoughtfully described.
To begin with, human being has many materialistic desires. In order to acquire these long cherished dreams, people need money. For Example, to buy a house is the most common dream of people. While others want to buy a luxury car and be happy. All these efforts require to have hefty amount of money. Most importantly, people need money to keep the loved ones happy. To be a perfect husband, parent or child requires to buy expensive gifts to wife, pay for university tuitions of child, or to pay for expensive medication of parents. People need money to take care of all these factors. So, money is required to be a happy individual as well as to make others happy.
On the contrary, many people will argue that money cannot always buy happiness. Rather, love, affection, and other humanly qualities are required to be happy. On top of that, people need to foster good relationship with friends and family members in order to be happy. For instance, an empirical survey conducted by The Oxford University revealed that, 50% people who considers themselves happy has opted for having strong social bonding in order to be happy.
To sum up, in order to be happy in life it important not only to possess money but also to take care of other factors. By taking care of all these factors people may become happy & live happily ever after.
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- Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money How might having a lot of money make people happy What other things in life can make people happy 61
- Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money How might having a lot of money make people happy What other things in life can make people happy 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69256756757 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44861485803 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7108737634 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.45 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371276179893 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124425989992 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806996163028 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245047771811 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039014138618 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.