Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money How might having a lot of money make people happy What other things in life can make people happy
World resources are going to limited with the population growth and every thing is valued based on the face price. Therefor, some people thinks having considerable money on hand will play key role to maintain the happy of life.
Happiness is mainly rely on the availability of use of basic need to live. It includes, water, food, shelter and air. However, except to the natural air, which we consumed freely, all other we have to expend for some amount of money to consume. Further, all other wants, such as commodity items and communication items, are any way priced. Moreover, most of the governments are not only offered free education and health for their people but also imposed tax on them to facilitate other infrastructure. Therefore, with the lot of money in hand can purchase all the needs and wants to live better.
On the other hand, earning money is not a easy task and have to do lot of commitment. Therefor, most of the people waste their life on competition to find more money to have happy life. Nevertheless, people not realize that happiness is on mind mainly wit the satisfaction rather than the physical money note. Further, leisure time with kids and family members, witch cannot buy from the out side market and the value is not yet finalized to purchase. Therefor, self satisfaction and mental and physical health fitness, which can gain from the good family relationships and time to spend with kids is more valuable than money to have happy life.
Concluding, money is important ti have good life. However, I believe, happiness cannot be purchased and it should develop inner piece. Self satisfaction is influence hoghly on happiness rather than any physical entities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'limit'
Suggestion: limit
World resources are going to limited with the population growth and every th...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thinks having considerable money on hand will play key role to maintain the happy...
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Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...he happy of life. Happiness is mainly rely on the availability of use of basic nee...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... use of basic need to live. It includes, water, food, shelter and air. However, ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...On the other hand, earning money is not a easy task and have to do lot of commitm...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...mily members, witch cannot buy from the out side market and the value is not yet finaliz...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n from the good family relationships and time to spend with kids is more valuable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92334494774 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62450533683 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7979310776 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431949761818 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133146895329 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104185661376 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2547792137 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603309240441 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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