Movies are known to help relax and thereby offer entertainment to the public. With the advancing digital technologies, while some are of an opinion that films can be seen using the handheld devices such as mobile phones and tablets, others argue that they need to be watched in a cinema to have real fun. In this essay, I will discuss both the sides and conclude with my views.
To begin with, major advantage in watching a film on the personal devices is the time savings it offers. Although seeing films on relatively small screens strains the eyes, some choose this so as to avoid the tiredness that commuting to a multiplex causes. For instance, in Bangalore, on an average, two hours of commute time is the minimum time needed to travel to a cinema in order to watch a movie that has a length about two hours. So, people who want to make best use of their time often avoid travelling.
On the contrary, others emphasise on the need to watch a film in a cinema because of the experience it offers. Ambience, video quality along with the sound effects are the typical reasons that this set of crowd usually give. Also, varieties of refreshments available at the cinemas gives an opportunity to enjoy the movie more. To exemplify, it is an amazing feeling to immerse ourselves in a movie with a tub of popcorn by our side. Therefore, anyone who likes to enjoy the experience will end up going to the cinema hall.
To conclude, while the both sides have their own rationale to support their choices, I personally think watching movie in a cinema is a thrilling experience than having to watch it over my phone or tablet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...about two hours. So, people who want to make best use of their time often avoid travellin...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62413793103 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52061417878 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6804579092 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273300272893 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856579087733 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788292760996 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157552195546 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639129886276 0.056905535591 112% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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