Some people say that a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and
experience.
No one can deny the fact that the upbringing of children plays a crucial role in their overall development as adults, and for that reason, it is critically important that children are raised in a healthy environment. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, children are taught certain virtues by their parents, which can certainly have a positive impact on their adult life in the future. In other words, adults continue to follow the same values which they were taught during their childhood. Drawing from my own experience, I still remember that during my middle school days my mother used to teach me the importance of various virtues like compassion, respect, gratitude, modesty, sincerity, and many more. Consequently, I have been inculcating these values in real life since childhood. Eventually, this has even helped me to become successful in my personal and professional life. Had I not got these values, I would not have become a responsible adult.
Moreover, children are mentally affected by the behavior of their parents. To elucidate, when children are raised in a violent and traumatic environment, they tend to learn the same behavior of their parent. My opinion in this matter has been profoundly influenced by the experience of my friend, Jia. During our school days, Jia always used to tell me about the constant fight between her parents. Moreover, she was sad and isolated due to this problem. After ten years, she was diagnosed with clinical depression and had to leave her college studies. What I learned from Jia is that the cognitive development of a person is strongly influenced by his/her childhood environment.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly conclude that childhood upbringing can have either a positive or negative impact on adulthood. Not only will it help people to inculcate good values in life, but also impact their mental development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73351155823 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589665653495 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.650932473 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411690207858 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14222689838 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150877219629 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249024951039 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20980868273 0.056905535591 369% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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