Some people say that a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been said by the group of individuals that prosperous career of adults is depends upon their upbringing by their parents. I strongly agree with this statement and reasons to support my agreement will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs along with some suitable examples.
To commence with, there are some factors which can evidenlty support this notion. Firstly, there are parents who expects their child to be punctual and consistent to achieve certain goals. That being said, such parents teach their youngsters to be disciplined as that is the only key to stay determined be it in academics or sports. For instance, a family of army man teaches discipline as a paramount importance to their juveniles so that they can be considered as a valuable assest when they step into their professional life.
Secondly, if a child is grown up in a traumatic atmosphere they will always lack in some values which might down lift their confidence. That is to say, because of mounting competetion in today's society it is quite crucial for a child to have an ambience where they can work on their skills in order to compete with other participants. To illustrate, my friend used to be a topper during his high school, however, becahse of domestic strains, he was not able to ehance his cognitive skills anymore and compete with others.
To conclude, I have a firm belief that success of any individual is the sheer replica of how he or she has been brought up since their childhood. Teaching discpline as a chief reason to taste the success and on the other side growing in a depressive environment can influence child's future dramatically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77378397699 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.5607621587 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209413915353 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776820203596 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407239945774 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118896169404 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123650451535 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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