Some people say that protecting the environment is the government responsibility others believe that every individual should be responsible for it, discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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It is evidently proven that environment is a part of daily routine life among people and every living and nonliving thing in this world. No doubt the more well-maintained environment will always have a good and positive impact on life and surroundings. In my opinion it’s the government responsibility to maintain the environment considering the cost, time and it being one of their duties when ruling.
Government should work with local body general, NGO and other funding organization to get ideas and funds to maintain the environment and should bare the cost of it because if requires huge amount of money to do it which only a government can do if required can also get help from World Bank. In country like China government takes care of the complete environment taking suggestions and ideas from people itself to make people live better and healthier.
However, everything cannot be done and looked upon by the government and keep monitoring it, at times it’s also people responsibly to maintain the environment well without damaging, spoiling it, in fact people should come out voluntarily to support the government in giving ideas and little bit of financial contribution. Every citizen should know and be aware of it that the environment which they are living is their own and well fare for the children’s in future.
At the end of the day its clear that both people and government should take care of the environment for betterment future to stay healthier. Also, should know that a good well-maintained environment will bring bright future, Finally People and government should take more balanced approach in maintaining the environment considering the surroundings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, well, in fact, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25182481752 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03211679053 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9467169342 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.888888889 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307923989391 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134670295735 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622802709256 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194899026712 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588206395714 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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