Some people say that technologies like mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no double that electronic devices like mobile phones have become an integral part of our day to day lives. Although some people believe that these cell phones help them stay connected with their loved once, I would argue that, due to over usage of mobile phones, people are actually distancing themselves from their family and friends.
On the one hand, those who think mobile phone is a blessing and which allows them to speak with their closed one’s at any point in time. This is because many of them migrate to different cities or even countries either for study or work purpose in order to succeed in their lives. In contrast, if there is no usage of these small gadgets, people would find it really difficult to overcome their homesickness, which ultimately effecting their education and career.
However, on the other hand, my view is that these cell phones come with a lot of limitations and interruption of face-to-face conversation is one among them. The reason for this is that because people are burying themselves into their smart screens all the time irrespective of their surroundings. For example, when a group of people gather to celebrate an event, everyone is busy posting pictures or checking their face book status on their smart phones, instead of spending some quality time with one another. If people draw a line to this over usage, they would create more bonding relationships among their family and friends resulting in uniqueness among themselves.
In conclusion, even though mobile phones bought a revolutionary change in the way we communicate with each other, it is my firm belief that these are also becoming a distraction when it comes to social interaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this cell' or 'these cells'?
Suggestion: this cell; these cells
...ives. Although some people believe that these cell phones help them stay connected with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99298245614 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62878448119 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.479583331 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.3 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132282620025 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559303090369 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383995442077 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924615865725 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460686225722 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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