Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born.
What might be the reason for this?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Living in the hometown is a dream of many people and few individuals prefer to live at their birthplace because they do not find it comfortable to relocate far from their home. This essay will scrutinize the reasons behind it in forthcoming paragraphs along with the merits and demerits of staying in the local regions.
Taking care of the parents is one of the main purposes behind this as few individuals do not leave their parents alone at home at the cost of fulfilling their own dreams. Usually, old people do not wish to leave their homes to accompany their children due to which people have to stay near to their birth places. Another reason for not leaving the home is the emotional attachment with the family, friends, and relatives which makes an individual continue living at their native place.
The major advantage of living near the place of birth is friendly surroundings that enables one to enjoy one's life the most. In addition to this, most of the people get parental property as a gift, due to which they are not burdened to spend their earnings for a shelter. For example, a recent survey conducted by the National Sample Survey Office, New Delhi revealed that people who got inherent support in terms of house and land were more successful than the person who had to start everything from the beginning.
Despite the benefits of it, a section of society faces few difficulties in settling in their locality. Less source of income in some areas is the colossal disadvantage of it which not only restricts one to earn better but also affects the career growth of that person. Furthermore, people do not prefer to live in their native town if the weather condition of such places is too harsh to live as seen in upper areas of Uttarakhand where there is a threatening risk of floods and cloudbursts.
To conclude, living near to the loved one is always preferable only if there are better career opportunities available in the locality. Though benefits are more as compared to the drawbacks, its contrary side cannot be ignored. However, all this depends upon the personal choices of an individual whether to stay near to the hometown or to settle away from it.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... surroundings that enables one to enjoy ones life the most. In addition to this, mos...
^^^^
Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the locality. Though benefits are more as compared to the drawbacks, its contrary...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78364116095 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57482208859 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54617414248 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2682332893 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281642042662 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091092680764 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585358132615 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151336226063 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048260732081 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... surroundings that enables one to enjoy ones life the most. In addition to this, mos...
^^^^
Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the locality. Though benefits are more as compared to the drawbacks, its contrary...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78364116095 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57482208859 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54617414248 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2682332893 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281642042662 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091092680764 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585358132615 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151336226063 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048260732081 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.