Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they are born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In the recent period, it is noticed that people prefer to stay where they are born in lieu of moving to a new place. There are some reasons for that specific decision followed by some pros and cons discussed in the below paragraph.
Starting with the reasons, the first and foremost that comes to my mind is the awareness about the facilities available in that specific region. As it is an individual birthplace, and the area where he grew up, he will be knowledged about different hospitals, schools, parks, and police stations in their vicinity. So, if any emergency arises they will have an idea of where and how to go. Secondly, dwelling in the same area will give people a chance to get together and enjoy their special days with their families. It is evident that when to live far away, you rarely get a chance to visit and see your family on regular or special days due to travel expenses. Hence, living in the same location will allow one to enjoy quality time with the family.
Moving with the advantages, staying at the same place will make an individual capable for the jobs in the local region. As the folk had obtained education from the known college oe school and have also gone through an internship in the specific area will make him eligible candidate for the company looking for a regional person. On the contrary, staying at the same geographical area will stagnate the growth of a person. For instance, the individual will not be known with the equipment used to ease the work and keep using the traditional way of performing the work due to lack of exposure to outer world.
To conclude, living in same area will allow to get a local job and chance to live with family, but it will obstruct the development.
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Suggestion: getting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60967741935 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42695794564 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3084060201 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161165394359 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609538892727 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400788044226 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114894819431 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506374907827 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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