Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Other move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for better a job, house community or even climate. Which do you prefer?
From ages people are moving from one place to another in search of shelter and food, but some people choose to remain stationary at same place. If I get chance to move somewhere for my future betterment I will definitely move. In my view there numerous benefits of moving from one location to another. This essay will discuss some of those benefits.
To begin with, I am a bit social person, I love to explore different locations, cousins, culture, and making new friends, so when I move from one place to other I get opportunity to meet different people. I learn many more things from them. I examine their living style, food pattern and their rituals. This helps me to enhance my knowledge about various places and people. Second advantage of shifting location is change in climate. Even a very small change in climate gives us quick refreshment which is very important these days.
Furthermore, As we know due to business policies world is coming closer. When people change their job in another countries they come across different work cultures. This helps them in getting better options to grow their career. At the same time their dependent family also gets benefits for example, when a person from developing county moves to developed country his family gets high standard of living, better education, and various government facilities for their future.
Eventually, due to some reasons, some people do not move from one place to another but looking at the benefits I prefer to move from one place to another for better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, second, so, for example, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93869731801 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46474830749 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.9416012095 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320543428161 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09429600339 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748012563447 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202025383533 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050916507948 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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