Some people think that air travel should grow without a limit, while others believe that governments should limit it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The means of transport through air is considered as the fastest mode and hence this should progress with no limits. but some people have the notion that government must take certain steps to control the development of travel via aeroplanes. I support the opinion that travel through airways has to increase without any control.
It is a certitude that flights are the fastest way of journey from one place to another. although there are numerous methods to travel, people prefer aircrafts for both the voyage of human and for the delivery of parcels to other states. For example, if the travel from Delhi to Chennai through railways takes nearly two days, an aircraft completes this journey in just three hours.They must be plied in frequent intervals and should connect all the major cities. What would be the result if more number of passengers commence to use flights for travel? As the degree of people utilizing this mode of transportation has expanded, this has to flourish immensely with an additional operation of planes.
Secondly, few have a sober thinking that the government ought to take measures to control the improvement of aircrafts. this might be due to certain factors such as the loss that might have incurred to the other means of transport and also due to the availabilty of a limited amount of well-built aircrafts. For example, in olden days people exploit seaways for travelling but now there is a minimal usage of the ships. To cite an example for the second factor correspondingly, the aircraft company called the spicejet is considered to be the worst one as there is always a delay in the arrival of flights and also these flights are not properly maintained. The above discussed factors are the reasons for some people to have a thought that the government should control the growth of aircrafts.
To conclude, although there is a prevailance of two contrast ideas namely a requirement in the control of airways development and an increment in the growth of aircrafts, i follow the verity that the exploitation and consequently the operation of this mode of transport invented by the Wright brothers has to raise tremendously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99171270718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77075541307 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6708332031 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.071428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172497955702 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630098288658 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513644674195 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100203299831 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657898841176 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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