Some people think that all University students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should be only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology
Discuss both views and give your opinion
The problem of shortage of scientists has sparked a heated argument about whether tertiary institutions' students should be restricted to major in only science and technology related subjects or courses of their own choices. In my opinion, I think the students should be allowed to exercise their freedom and, therefore, venture into their areas of interests.
On the one hand, in order to have abundant scientists who might proffer practical solutions to the current mysteries of the world, some people believe that just scientific courses should be studied in the universities. Proponents of this view believe that if the universities do not produce as many science graduates as possible, there might be a universal shutdown due to the likely environmental catastrophes. Although they may be correct, do they really consider that each individual has unique strength ? Perhaps they think every knowledge and skill can be acquired and developed respectively through tertiary education, which is incorrect.
On the other hand, with regards to freedom of choice, I believe students will be relevant to the society if they are permitted to select their preferred course. This is because, since their interest lie entirely in what they willingly practice, they tend to be more successful. In fact, unlike those who forcefully studied a science subject, majority of successful professionals attain high-level career largely due to their passion for the profession. In other words, passion facilitates assimilation of ideas in school, which in turn might yield positive result, otherwise, all efforts and purpose will be wasted
To conclude, despite the fact that the potential science students may be of significant value in the future, the tendency that many other students may not develop interest in the course is high. That is to say, they may have higher probability of success in their areas of Interests. Therefore, I think higher institution students should be allowed to study whatever course they admire.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, therefore, i think, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4082278481 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8682313691 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4493400621 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.416666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49004556285 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174534876205 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768899255416 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284815910985 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315029704804 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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