It is important to consider whether art holds any importance in a child’s life or not. Some believe that learning art is crucial for students, whereas others are of the opinion that it is good for nothing. In my opinion, art plays a vital role in all-round development of a child’s ability by fostering creativity and other essential skills.
On the one hand, there are some people who underestimate art as a subject, and consider it as nothing but a waste of time. One of the preponderant reasons behind this is that it is very unlikely to get a well-paid job by studying art. This is because artists usually have to struggle a lot in life to earn money compared to the people in other professions. For instance, majority of the students prefer scientific and technological subjects over arts just because these professions provide lucrative salaries and other benefits to its pursuers. Another point to consider is that schools in our country do not count art to be as important as other subjects. What’s more, some educational institutions do not even have an art teacher to impart the basic knowledge to the students. Needless to say, students as well as their parents see no hope in studying arts.
On the other hand, some people think highly of art and bear an optimistic view towards students learning art in the schools. I support their perspective because art not only improves the creative skills of the students but also helps them to express their feeling and ideas comprehensively. A recent study conducted in a renowned university reported that students, who are into art subjects, have superior cognitive abilities as well as a faster decision making skills than their peers. Moreover, art brings out the hidden potential in a child, which aids them to manifest their artistic skills from a very early period of life. While subjects like science and business can pave the way to earn more money, they often cannot ignite creativity and innovative ideas in a child’s mind like art subjects do.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that art helping in the overall development of a child’s mental and intellectual capabilities cannot be overlooked. Although art may not be able to provide a person with better job offers and luxurious lifestyle, it can certainly develop skills that will be rewarding in the long run.
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care To what extent do you agree 89
- While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming To what extent do you agree 92
- With increase population and even growing urban centers many countries are losing their natural beauty spots What benefits are there to protect places of natural beauty How can this be solved 95
- In nearly all science courses at university there are significantly more male students than female students What is the reason for this What could be done to balance out the numbers 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.945 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79587195701 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5935403248 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.352941176 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262814240653 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876827378049 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724354735986 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158754109517 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315446579319 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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