Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however,
believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some people, crime rates can be curbed if criminals are awarded longer prison sentences, whereas some
people insists om finding other effective methods. In my opinion, many other measures can be taken to reduce the crime
rate.
To begin with, a precedent is set when prisoners serve a longer sentence for their crime. Needless to say, others
in the society will take a lesson out of it, and as a result, will not try to engage in criminal activities. Moreover,
most of their life, prisoners spend in jail which makes them realise the importance of freedom. These feelings can
be used to create awareness among common people by sharing prisoners experience, living in jails. For instance, a
a person in jail is subject to regret for the rest of his life when he misses the precious moments that could have
been spent with family especially seeing his child grow.
However, there are several other ways for curbing crime. First of all, creating awareness about the consequences of
various type of crime, explaining the exact punishment by law for each crime.As a result, a fear is created for
abrogating the law, hence lower number of crimes can be witnessed. Secondly, ameliorating the standard of life,
which is the responsibility of governments can bear fruitful results. As most of the crimes are committed because of
poverty when finding difficulty to make ends meet for their families. For example, a person who is unable to provide
food for his family is forced to rob and get money in order to provide food for his family. Therefore, in this regard,
governments are to be held responsible in failing to provide basic facilities of life to people.
In conclusion, most people committ crime due to negligence and realise their mistakes soon. Therefore, giving longer
sentences to those people may be inhumane and they should be given a chance to live freely.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01572327044 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6237592448 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5778220893 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0666666667 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186993190131 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687200575574 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658510396846 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600532957704 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621326931272 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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