Staying fit has risen debates and have divided people in thought groups. Some support the suggestion that the most ideal way to keep one self is to enroll in a gym or other similar fitness clubs; whereas, a few other state that daily activities as walking and climbing stairs is more than enough .Therefore, ahead of my decision, both viewpoints would be analyzed.
Considering the first view, proponents explain that most importantly, a gym or a fitness club offers afitness regime to individuals.In today's hectic lifestyle, people hardly have time to exercise and follow a fitness routine. When they join a gym, for instance, it becomes an inevitable part of the daily life and they are pushed to undergo a systematic fitness routine .Moreover,some need more than simple physical activities as walking.Those with obesity, heart disease or other health issues can have effective workout on treadmills and elliptical. This can help manyto prevent health issues at an early age.
On the contrary, those whostandby the latter opinion have their own claims. Most commonly, (linker)it is perceived that if individuals follow healthy habits as simple as walking orclimbing stairs, it would be extremely impactful on general well-being .Medical expertsadvice an average person to walk 10,000 steps a day to be healthy. These types can be recorded with a Fitbit or the Apple watch. Thiswould make people more aware to the importance of usual activities as walking, climbing stairs or even doing common physical household chores.This explains the lesser need for a gym or any fitness club (explanation).
To sum up and offer my position, I would support both ways or a combination of both to stay fit.
Although it is a personal choice, I would state that if walking orclimbing stress is enough, and enrolling in a fitness club can boost health and help to avoid some medical complications. By choosing any, we must keep in mind that health is wealth.
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- Anyone can post information on the internet Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient Discuss both the views with your opinion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82798514848 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0879227005 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284063035249 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923007225375 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569804076496 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153840827266 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392247936033 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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