Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both the views with your opinion.
Many people like to go to the gymnasium or fitness club in order to keep themselves fit and stay in shape, whereas this is unnecessary for some who believe daily activities like walking and climbing stairs every day can help them stay healthy. In my opinion, daily activities can be adequate to maintain a healthy life.
On the one hand, there are plenty of facilities for different sports and physical exercises in gyms and health clubs; people can choose whatever they want to train themselves with. As a result, this makes it more interesting for people to participate in sports. In addition, professional facilities guarantee people's safety while exercising. People can also decide if they want intensive training or moderate training in the gym, and there will be professional trainers to make fitness plans for them so that they can exercise in a more efficient way. To illustrate this, many celebrities or sportsmen have their own gyms where they exercise under a personal trainer to maintain their fitness.
On the other hand, day-to-day activities are decent enough to keep fitness. People who want to stay healthy by conducting a necessary amount of daily activities do not need to spend extra time in gyms because doing these activities is a part of their lives. Walking is a great exercise which can prevent diabetes and cardiovascular diseases. Climbing stairs is also a part of daily activities which can be considered as an intense activity to burn calories and keep body fit.
In conclusion, serious health conscious persons might prefer health clubs or gyms for fitness. Like other people I believe that certain daily activities can be enough to keep oneself healthy and fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05693950178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70622260442 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1640908842 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234421962669 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859833513256 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479105287442 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158523206618 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353800184569 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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