some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree
Over the centuries, there have been many changes in the way criminals have been punished. Some fraction of society believe that certain criminals should be engaged into charity work instead of putting them into jail. I agree to an extent because not all crimes are equal, however it is important to punish an individual if he commits a heinous crime.
To begin with, the wrongdoer should be punished according to the seriousness of the crime. There are people who go against the norms of society due to forcedness. For instance, sometimes a beggar steals food out of hungriness, in this scenario it is morally wrong to put him behind the bars. He can instead be made to plant trees or to help in some unpaid work that can prosper the society. Moreover, juveniles these days are browbeaten into a certain criminal activities due to peer pressure. Such teenagers should be counselled and be asked to help the needy people.
On the contrary, no leverage should be given for a dangerous crime. These prisoners should be remained behind the bars. Exemplary, a person guilty of rape must not be given any mercy and be charged with a life long sentence to set an example in the society. Given a leverage to such individuals may lead to more crimes as they will have no fear of law.
Concluding the above paragraphs, it is evident that certain criminals can be made to do unpaid work to help the society and to provide second chance to an offender but others should be punished to quote an example to the society and keep the crime in check.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67279411765 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51575646699 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4482155692 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336610566047 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11061385456 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845716788962 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199419659932 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421315879142 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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