Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?
Some individuals consider unpaid jobs should be allotted to jailbirds rather than keeping them in prisons. In my opinion, I completely agree, immature criminals should be given a chance of improvement by helping the society in various development tasks as well as educating them right paths in life.
Firstly, prisoners will learn some sort of skills, which latter they can use while working in society. Offenders should be given an opportunity to work for the community in which they can learn some experience. In addition to that, the environment plays a vital role to influence individuals, social workers working with prisoners can also help them to find the right path in life. It has proven that unpaid works by prisoners often motivates them to do some better work in life after finishing their imprisonment time.
Secondly, the environment of prisons creates stressful situations including other individuals of the same category, therefore it is better to allow them to do some volunteer tasks in the society. An atmosphere plays an important role while teaching and guiding paths. Residing with other prisoners will not give any learning to any prisoner, instead, they will teach each other more bad ways to survive. Thus, it is better to provide an opportunity to work. On the records, awareness and spreading knowledge is the right way to recover the prisoner from the criminal mentality and it has shown good outputs while applying in Jammu central jail In India.
In conclusion, holding prisoners inside the cage is no way to teach them the right routes in life. Although, providing chances to support society in various jobs can help them as well as benefit society in many ways. Hence, I believe that offenders should be given some social tasks to perform instead in custody of the jail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06688963211 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64377833321 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8026650946 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216606570269 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801434623245 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648397110654 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136003007998 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507950942547 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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