Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is deemed by many people that children waste a large part of their time by reading story- books whereas this time could be utilised by doing other activities . I completely agree with this point of view as sports and other curriculum activities are more beneficial for pupils.
To begin with, it will be an absurd thought if a children expend most of his leisure time in reading story magazines while sitting at one place . The main reason is that children would become socially inactive and lethargic that would hinder the overall growth of a child. Therefore,it is better to indulge the pupils into sports which would make a child socially active as well as beneficial for physical development. For instance, hockey and cricket need to be played in groups in playground .These games will give them team spirit and a chance to make friendship that is not possible while reading story's book.
In addition, the same time can also be utilised by participating in the curricular activities such as, Dance, Singing, Painting and Sketching that would give them a chance to compete with real world, unlike stories where a child deals with the imaginary world. On the other hand, although imaginary powers would be enhanced , if a child reads story books but these skills could also be acquired through Painting and Sketching as well.
To conclude,I reckon that children ought to be encouraged to participate in the sports and curricular activities which is beneficial for children's intellectual and physical development rather than reading fairy tale's books which could make a young one lethargic and antisocial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, i reckon, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06766917293 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64140455193 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5269633219 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.777777778 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7777777778 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276838238831 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123384622794 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106555137815 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184898341454 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846782394582 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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