Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Discuss both sides and state your opinion.
People’s opinions differ regarding ratio of money earned and free time.
One group states that having more finance and short leisure time preferable as to have more free time and less money, while others adhere to radically other view. From my point of view , having more money and being short of time preferable for various reasons.
Proponents who favoring leisure time over money base their point on couple of reasons . Firstly people who have more spare time can engage themselves in various activities that develop them as individuals. For example learning foreign language or honing other skills can be achieved at that time, and these might be fundamental in their later life. Secondly, having more time means that one can allocate time for his own amusement. Indeed, spending more time with family playing with children are more vital for many of us and therefor prioritized. Moreover, we are social animals and interacting with friends and family brings us sense of belonging, which in turns boost us spiritually.in short, having more time lead us to more profound family bond and can cheer us mentally.
However ,I tend to agree with other group of people who prioritize money possession. To begine with, we live in money-based world, as all our progress and development depends gradually on sum we earn. In spite of scarcity of time, with more money we can provide prosperous future for our children, which is one of human beings prime missions. For instance, for the time being quality educational establishments annual fee is high, and we have to be affluent enough to send our children to gain knowledge there. To continue with, earning more money and having less leisure pastime we secure our well-being in the future. Today in many countries pensions are remarkably low, and elderly people struggling to make ends meet. So we can put aside some fortune before retiring, which would provide us with means to pay our bills and why not travel.
To conclude, there are two group of people who favoring different things one in favor of more recreational time, while, others consider money earning more important. For me, although, having more free time is good, but we live in the world where money can solve many problems and we have to concentrate on budget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in short, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99212598425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53197213418 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548556430446 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7447568103 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404086063725 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156755954111 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113634487421 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295294602752 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882533790755 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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