some universities now offer their courses on the internet so that, people can study online . is it a positive or negative development.
Education is the milestone playing magnificent role to make better career of the student. In this advanced era, universities have made it more easier to provide such courses and diplomas on internet. However, in some situation it effect negatively on student who are disable to use it.
There are manifold points to shore up its merits, first and foremost, in this changing era, education has changed and help a lot to the students to enhance their knowledge and creativity. To illustrates, in colleges students are totally dependent on tutor's theory but by the virtue of internet they become independent. In consequences, they rejuvenate something new with creative mind and different to the college classes.Furthermore, it is the best option for those who are unable to admit in the big institutions. As in some poor families parents can not afford the highest amount of fees, dresses and other products. so, online is the best method to qualify their skills living at there home. Next, some students work outside and want to complete further study. So, using computers and internet they adopt everything related to their course.
On the second side, there are multifarious points to endorse its negative. Initially, joining smart classes is the nice way to enhance their horizon of knowledge but the excessive use of these electronic device also effects badly on human body such as eye side and back pain. Thus, using new method is responsible for health hazards over and above, some college goers are less savvy to use internet. They unable to operate and search information based on diploma. So, in this case it is impossible for learners to qualify. Moreover, most of student understand the classes of teacher. They face problems attending online classes because the question quarries related to topic confuse them and they loss their marks in final.
To sum up, studying with the help of internet because flavor of today's generation they feel monotonous from the traditional methods. Using new techniques they can easily reach their destination. however, its harmful effects also create difficulties for students that can not be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Message: Did you mean 'effects'?
Suggestion: effects
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1776504298 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76430205195 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590257879656 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4081918119 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.35 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184313628336 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530792839955 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434581053522 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114493369634 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236387850745 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.