Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, sports are the medium for healthy and fit lifestyle, therefore it plays an intrinsic role in human life as well as in community. However there are few dangerous sports which have negative impact on society and individual’s life, with these view in mind few people are against playing risky sports. I strongly believe that unsafe sports need to be prohibit in each country to ensure safety.

There are few risky sports which ensue in taking human life, not only player but spectators as well. For an instance, the car racing is the game in which racer risk there life by taking part in, there are few events happened in past in as per which they Racer lost the control on the speed went off the track and hit the fencing, which as a result injured many viewers and took away few spectators life and sometimes the racers life as well. Therefore country needs to outlaw such hazardous sports which allows civilian to put there and other life at risk just for some money and entertainment.

Moreover few sports are encouraging the destructive behavior in people and even in young generation, which indirectly taking us towards inhumanity. For Example, frees style wrestling is a sport, as per which both opponent in desire of win, try to harm each other that leads to severe injuries, in addition to that viewers get influence by these kind of fight and act similarly in real life situations. Not only adult but the children as well grasp everything and behave as it is. Henceforth to avoid such impact on society, this kind of sport needs to be suppressed.

To conclude, I strongly emphasize on banishment of the sports which are unsafe for sportsman as well as its spectators and also don’t encourage any good behavior in community. As legal prohibition will help country to protect the humanity and will save the humans life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... in human life as well as in community. However there are few dangerous sports which ha...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'spectators'' or 'spectator's'?
Suggestion: spectators'; spectator's
... injured many viewers and took away few spectators life and sometimes the racers life as w...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'racers'' or 'racer's'?
Suggestion: racers'; racer's
...y few spectators life and sometimes the racers life as well. Therefore country needs t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... and sometimes the racers life as well. Therefore country needs to outlaw such hazardous ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...st for some money and entertainment. Moreover few sports are encouraging the destruct...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...dition to that viewers get influence by these kind of fight and act similarly in real life...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Henceforth,
...l grasp everything and behave as it is. Henceforth to avoid such impact on society, this k...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... protect the humanity and will save the humans life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84591194969 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59566575598 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550314465409 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6080033687 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104684049069 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485791979061 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369163937379 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716869358698 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417291227348 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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