Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Not all sports activities are peaceful and harmless. Many politicians in Kazakhstan suggest to stop the spread of sports posing any danger to life. However, others disagree with them and think people should have the right for a choice. This essay will consider both points of view and agrees with the idea of freedom in choosing sports.
The first reason is that athletes often die in competitions. In risky sports, such as boxing, competitors can often perish when they receive heavy blows in the head. Another reason why life-threatening sports should be prohibitive is that they may attract inexperienced people to attempt. Breathtaking stunts by experienced athletes often appeal to young people, who crave for the same fame as their sports idols. Besides, ex-sportsmen often suffer from chronic injuries . Traumas, which athletes gained during their performance, may cause lifelong discomfort, including headaches and painful fractures, long after retirement.
However, many politicians claim that dangerous sports should be accessible to all. Their main argument is that people have the right to do any sports. For example, according to the Constitution of Republic of Kazakhstan, no one can restrict the right of self-expression, so restricting this kind of sports may shutter democracy in the country. In addition, people would put their lives at risk anyway if extreme activities were banned. Many people can hardly imagine their lives without doing an extreme sport, no matter whether it is restricted. Further, any sports promote healthy lifestyle. Every sport require physically active lifestyle, so, regardless how risky the sport is, young people, who its interested in it, either refuse or quit bad habits, such as smoking and drinking alcohol.
In conclusion, even though some politicians state about forbidding life-threatening sports, it is unreasonable to do so, because it will counter fundamental human rights and have no effect on the innate desire for risks in some people.
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Suggestion: suggest stopping
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46623794212 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89356872628 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646302250804 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1946735847 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213738358018 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655555996738 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717551489808 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120837673027 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667855990006 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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