Some people think that dangerous sports such as boxing, or motor-racing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is undeniable that some sports are likely considered to be risky and unsafe for some people. In my opinion, some of these sports should not be allowed for a couple of reasons.
First of all, boxing is a kind of a sport that might make fatal injuries for athletes in the long run. This is because an athlete might be hit in the head repetitively, which will damage the brain. For instance, the iconic boxer Mike Tyson, which considers one of the strongest players in boxing is, unfortunately, suffering from Parkinson disease due to this kind of sports. Moreover, doctors announced that the main reason behind this disease is being hit many times into very sensitive areas. In contrast , if he did not play this
kind of sports, he would not have this disease.
Furthermore, another type of sports that should be banned is motor-racing. The reason behind it is that racers sometimes lose the ability to control their bikes due to high speed, as these bikes can simply exceed 300 kilo-meters per hour. Therefore, deadly accidents might occur and resulted in death. To illustrate, Michael Schumacher was recently suffering from a coma for 5 years due to a deadly accident in the World Race Championship. Officials said that he lost control on one of the curves and resulted in serious injuries. On the contrary , if he was not driving at a high speed on that curve, he would not be able to be in this
coma for many years.
To conclude, many sports should be prohibited to save lives. Although such sports bring excitements through the crowds, athletes can suffer from serious injuries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78181818182 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59748233203 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1143473437 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205467027673 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755022192 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628661911663 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968422017196 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599551194464 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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