Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others?
Many countries throughout the world hold different ranks in multiple comparative indices. A faction of the society believes that a country's pace of economic development is the critical determinant of how high it is ranked on the scale. However, a vast majority owes a country's progress to several other factors, than the mere economy. This essay will list additional parameters that define a thriving nation and reflect on the importance of the most vital element of them all.
Gone are the days when a handful of countries was considered super-powers solely on the value of their trillion-dollar economies. In recent years, society is giving weight to aspects such as "Happiness", "Fair judicial process", "Future-readiness", "Transparent and progressive governance", and "Protection of Human Rights" etc. A recent 2017 survey conducted on immigrant lists the reasons why people from developed countries choose to uproot their families and settle in a new country. The cogent determinant that emerged was that people value "Human Rights" the most.
Human Rights are the fundamental necessity of a fair society. The way a country cares for the rights of its citizens has a remarkable impact on its societal and cultural values. Nations that do not merit equal rights, and are ranked lower on the Human Rights Index will inevitably lose their economic merit as they will see the exodus of people moving out. A good illustration of this is that younger generations are leaving Asian countries like Afghanistan, Vietnam, Korea and India, to open-minded countries like Canada. This migration contributes to the increasing young workforce of a country, thereby bettering its chances to become the next big economy.
To conclude, this ubiquitous transformation of the younger generation voting for Human Rights depicts the reason that will be the crucial determinant of a country's progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57912457912 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57309658957 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2977113446 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119242786998 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472985739238 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374071972892 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822540288134 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396092771351 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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