Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are those factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?
It is considered by some that the economic rate of a country is the best way to access its prosperity, however, others think that there are many other factors which determine how prosperous the country is, some of the factors other than economy are, the health care, educational system, and, quality of life index.
Although, a good economy is a must, but is not the only factor to measure the prosperity of a country. The health care, educational system, and quality of life keeps a place ahead of others. The educational system helps to provide a big boost to the country as it provides a platform to the citizens of a place as well as invites foreign students, which in fact contributes towards the growth of a place. For example, The United States of America being one such country that is highly benefited by the student influx as they then contribute towards their growth. Another being the health care maintain better health prospects by updated vaccinations and immediate cure with the latest technology and well-educated doctors.
In my opinion, I believe that the quality of life is the most important for a successful country, as it involves all other systems, such as education, health, and work environments as a job. The quality of life index measures, how to prosper the people are and are happy with their life, which starts from housing to utilities and rests of the factors.
In conclusion, along with economic growth, quality of life, health care, and education are the other factors that make a country successful. The quality of life index is the most important among them as it gives the idea of a country’s success rate among its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88070175439 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64059274989 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1293710094 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271158862527 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10279502238 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948387555443 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179249348254 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974650213176 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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