Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The environment plays an important role in maintaining the balance of life. The topmost cause of environmental depletion is human activity, as well as their negligence towards the protection of nature. it can be agreed that individuals are the ones who have to take action first, along with help from the government. Thus, we will discuss both the views according to my knowledge.
The substantial influence of human being's environmental depletion is enormous. it is the person who is causing the pollution has to change first. Then only we will be able to reduce the impact of depletion of nature. For example, after having chocolate, don.t throw the cover in the roadside, instead keep it with you until you find a dustbin to put it in. There is a saying that changes start from a single person. so small actions from all the individual contribute the bigger purpose of saving the world from extinction due to overutilization of environment for luxury. Therefore, individuals have to play a vital role in maintaining and guarding the environment and preserving it for the future.
Nevertheless, the importance of governmental actions is also an alarming reason. The amount of pollution produced by factories has to be limited by implementing the laws against pollution. As an illustration, in my country we have to plant ten trees when a child is born. until and unless we plant ten trees, we don't receive a birth certificate. By the way, people has to adhere to laws implemented by the government, otherwise, the effect will go in vain.
In the view of the arguments outlined here, my opinion is that, when an individual starts protecting, his family starts it too. By seeing someone doing good, other people are gonna imitate it. so, it's not so big for individuals after all, but individuals and governments has to work in hand to hand to achieve the goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, after all, as to, for example, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96518987342 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95612985733 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5217652934 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5789473684 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164311649562 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429946060656 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406515105145 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100938814449 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538191709347 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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