Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Environment plays an important role in maintaining the balance of life. The top most cause of environmental depletion is human activity, as well as their negligence towards protection of nature. It can be agreed that individuals are the one's who has to take action first, along with help from government. Thus, we will discuss on both the views according to my knowledge.
The substantial influence of human beings environmental depletion is enormous. It is the person who is causing the pollution has to change first. Then only we will be able to reduce the impact of depletion of nature. For example, after having a chocolate, don.t throw the cover in the roadside, instead keep it with you until you find a dustbin to put it in.There is a saying that changes start from single person. So small actions from all the individual contribute the bigger purpose of saving the word from extinction due to over utilization of environment for luxury. Therefore, individuals has to play a vital role in maintaining and guarding the environment and preserving it for future.
Nevertheless, the importance of governmental actions are also an alarming reason. The amount of pollution produced by factories has to be limited by implementing the laws against pollution. As an illustration, in my country we have to plant ten trees when a child is born. Until and unless we plant ten trees, we don't receive birth certificate. By the way, people has to adhere to laws implemented by government, otherwise the effect will go in vain.
In the view of the arguments outlined here, my opinion is that, when an individual starts protecting, his family starts it too. By seeing someone doing good, other people are gonna imitate it. So, its not so big for individuals after all, but individuals and governments has to work in hand to hand to achieve the goal.</span><br>
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...ividuals and governments has to work in hand to hand to achieve the goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, after all, as to, for example, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08280254777 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33376672369 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0886003788 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163257698849 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449595097138 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397575207205 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972975294321 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521850690973 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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