Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions
in a country.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
A major portion of populace vocalizes that historical sites and tourist sights should impose higher fees on international holiday than resident. I agree with given statement because government has already charged hefty amount of money in form of taxes to protect these national heritages and increased entrance fees would intensify the cash inflow of state.
Most of tourist destinations and cultural sites are state owned and If they charged high amount from denizens, it would be ethically wrong. Seemingly, citizenry already contribute hefty amounts in the form of direct and indirect taxes so that government could rationally spend these precious funds for the maintenance of tourist attraction sites and historical sites. Also it is biased to overlook the facts documented by UNESCO that even though American museums have risen the entrance tickets for overseas tourists, they allow free entry to their natives. Therefore, adopting two tier costing would be fundamentally correct and save the countrymen to pay high.
To continue, price differentiate would allow authorities to collect handsome amounts from overseas excursionists. Foreign visitors always have high disposable income which they usually squander on tours, sovereigns and leisure activities, thus their lavishly spending habit would endow a great opportunity to state to earn huge amount. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by Tourism Ministry in India, in the previous calendar year, application of price differentiate policy at Taj Mahal has multiplied the revenue of state.
Hence, by escalating the entrance fees of foreign tourists would intensify the income of state and these funds would be utilized for the preservation of historical sites
In conclusion, although increase prices would discharge foreign tourist, it would be the exploitation of innocent local public if they are charged twice. Moreover, dual price policy proliferates cash inflow of authorities and motivate them to spend more on the renovation and upkeep of places of national importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60128617363 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83453964988 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601286173633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3715766957 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.363636364 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150535878299 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054064668998 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462367977914 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087097601699 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309748512551 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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