Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while other believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Augmentation of crime rate in most part of the world is one of the contentious issue at the moment. Although, it is thought by many that barraging crime is sole responsibility of the state, while others advocate that people had better opt self-prevention techniques. However, self-protection begets benefits in terms of their safety, I believe that; it is better if government take crucial steps for barding crime in the society.
On the one hand, if people remains more vigilant in discharging their duties towards society as whole, and play effective role by keeping an eye on suspicious activities around them, definitely it will provide a short term solution to keep them safe. For instance, In USA government has developed a 24/7 emergency response system, where individuals lodge complaint against ongoing crime, when they find any suspect. As a result, a drop in crime rate is observed. However, I believe that this is not the solution to the actual problem because a lay man might get caught in a life threatening situation because of lack of training and expertise in dealing with a particular situation.
on the other hand, effective role of law and enforcement agencies, and proper implementation of legislation is thought to reduce the number of crime and criminals in the society, which works under the supervision of government. A short succinct example proclaiming this case, a person who found allegedly guilty in a serious crime should be sentenced to jail without even thinking twice. I believe this method is preferable because it will help reduce crime and enable people to live in peaceful environment.
Resolving the essay on my opinion, I presume that; although self-prevention might help people get off the criminals and crime activities, but government has better ought to protect society by any m
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...dealing with a particular situation. on the other hand, effective role of law a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15436241611 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00031528455 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8848336336 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.636363636 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244073427317 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836239993216 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05167728167 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138426350881 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346908605522 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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