Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while other believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As we know, the technology is making human being life very easy, as a result people are defending on technology to complete a few type of works such daily chores and communication. so, the technology is becoming a part of everybody’s life. however, some people don’t use technology to in their hobbies and works, so they don’t depend on technology. we descuss both views in this essay.
First of all, the chatting is a one of popular hobby since long time. however, since social networking sites come into the picture, netizens started using those site to chat and communicate. For example, so many people use Facebook to touch with friends and express their feeling. Thus, spending online is become great hobby nowadays. Another, interesting hobby is listing to music. The technology almost wiped out old way listing to music such live music and concerts. people started using smartphones and iPod to listen to music. As we discuss above, the technology changed the people life and hobbies, they tightly coupled with technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'few types'.
Suggestion: few types
...e defending on technology to complete a few type of works such daily chores and communic...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ks such daily chores and communication. so, the technology is becoming a part of e...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...coming a part of everybody's life. however, some people don't use technology ...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...o they don't depend on technology. we descuss both views in this essay. ...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...a one of popular hobby since long time. however, since social networking sites come int...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... to music such live music and concerts. people started using smartphones and iPod to l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75522391992 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8951582248 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0756234121792 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285862206328 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311061278322 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610477051796 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01331520391 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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