Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while other believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both the views and give your opinion ?
Criminal activity is exponentially increasing day by day. While some assert that it is the government’s duty, others believe that a person must secure themselves. From my perception, it is both the powers-that-be and citizens has a role to prevent the harmful effects of crime on society.
On the one hand, many people claim that it is the government's job to enforce strict rules against crime prevention. One of the main reason is that they have the power to implement proposals to protect their citizens against criminal events. For example, Indian authorities have amended strict laws and regulation such as hefty fines, imprisonment, etc. against several crimes such as cyber-hacking and online fund related scams. Moreover, the local bodies can use advertisement means to create awareness against violation and corruption. Such commercial advertisement on television, social media and radio is likely to make the general public more aware regarding crime prevention.
On the other hand, critics argue that the government cannot spontaneously reach the crime position. Therefore, citizens must learn to defend himself or herself in the case when an emergency arises. This can be achieved when people participate in the awareness drives conducted by the local bodies. As a result, these campaigns would help the general public to augment knowledge and expertise, thereby helping them to learn to take corrective actions during the criminal event. For example, Chinese citizens have to mandatory take Karate training to learn and defend during the robbery, burglary, etc. Thus, individuals must enrol themselves in self-defence coaching classes to tackle misconduct.
To recapitulate, I think that the government can amend stringent laws and create awareness for crime opposition. However, I believe that an individual can abide in these protocols and actively participate in these awareness drives to protect themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57627118644 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01043669603 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4084237373 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7647058824 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206750666964 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615801326101 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587828176972 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13088323232 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462030455828 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.